Cause & Effect Essay
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On today´s blog we are creating two outlines for cause & effects essays, hope you like it!💜💘💖😌
1. Focus on Effects Method
Topic: Stress impact on health.
Specific topic: What stress caused on your body.
Thesis statement: Most people deal with stress every day, but they are not aware of how this can affect their lives.
Prewriting state (list) :
-sadness or depression
-anxiety
-sleep problems
-Lack of motivation
Outline:
Introduction
Body
1. Sadness or depression
-People is not motivated to do the things they like
-lost of interested
2. Anxiety
-People are constantly worried about things they can control.
3. Sleep problems
-Thanks to stress our routine for going to the bed can be affected.
Conclusion
2. Focus on Causes Method
Topic: The causes of divorces.
Specific topic: What are the main reasons couples have problems.
Thesis statement: Nowadays it is quite common that couples get divorced a year after marriage, they are not aware of what caused this.
Prewriting state (list):
-lack of commitment
-infidelity
-conflict/ arguing
Outline:
Introduction
Body
1. Lack of commitment
-when couples do not talk to each other, or the keep secrets for themselves this can affect the relationship
2. Infidelity
-When one of both has an extra marriage relation, this will affect intensely the relationship.
3. Conflict/ arguing
-Lack of patient and not knowing how to manage feelings can lead to unnecessary discussions that might affect the marriage.
Conclusion
Well done with the ideas, but I suggest to make the thesis statements more specific, so we know what the essay will be about...
ResponderEliminarex: n°1 - "Most people deal with stress every day, but they are not aware that it may lead us to depression, lack of sleep an even to anxiety."
n°2 - "People might not be aware that lack of commitment, infidelity and arguing have become factors that lead to divorce nowadays."
Just suggestions, you may reformulate better :D